While I was short on time and the concept and animatic were created at the last moment, I am quite happy that it paid off a bit. The negative feedback was regarding the pacing, as it felt rushed and a bit over the place. The reviews for the visuals were quite mixed, although the colour pallete was appreciated as well as the abstract feel but everyone felt that the story was something unique but the animatic did not do justice to it. However, after discussions with Alex he and I both felt that if I opted for a motion design field rather than frame by frame animation then I could pick it up for further development. So the agenda would be to opt for a lest abstract story and work out on how pacing is done better. Regardless I think this was an effective one as I was able to approach a story symboliicaly and dive into a suffism concept. This assignemnt was effective in gettinng things started.
Arsalan Awais 