All the puzzle pieces seem to be coming in to place. The pacing now looks much better and the overall film tonally feels coherent. I have decided to go ahead with the some scenes and finish them off. For now I will be colouring them, but after approval I will add lighting and shadows and render the frames.
Since the poetry also felt that, at certain points where I have added extra establishing shots those amplify the poem and setting. It also foreshadows what it about to come.
For the handwashing scene, I added dirty clothes in sink and to connect it to the previous scene I animated a leaking tap.
The most tricky part was figuring out the metaphor of bathing hand in white, I went for a literal representation but I will with it a way that seems symbolic. For example, add a bit of glow in the particular scene to give a dream sequence feel.
Arsalan Awais 