Script Development | Update# 9

Episode Name | Adventures in Lava Land

Fade in.

Ext. Shot of Elementary School

Sound of the school bell ringing.

Cut to:

A huge wave of molten lava whooshed by.

Close-up of a volcano, oozing out molten lava.

Cut to:

2 kids standing on top of a cabinet drawer calling out to someone.

The camera pans to reveal 2 more children on a table opposite to them.

Hee-Chul (giving an interview to the camera, while

the children are in the background shouting to other kids across)

I ruined my dress this morning. Well, I did not do it myself, Soby did.

Cut to:

Flashback of Hee-chul (high angle shot) looking at the volcano (who is about to burst), pointing, and shouting. Her dress is dirty.

Close-up of Soby who is panicked (signifying he did something wrong). He gulps.

Cut to:

Present – Track shot of two kids (Dilbar and Howard) rowing in the lava on cushions converted into rafts.

Howard

Soby is always causing trouble. Just the other day he was messing with the class pet.

(Dilbar whispers into Howard’s ear) Howards

Oh yeah! He has a special corner in the principal’s office. It even says SOBY’S CORNER!

Cut to:

Closeup of a paper sign on the wall that says Soby’s Corner. Zoom out to a long shot of soby sitting in front of it.

Cut to:

Present time – dilbar whispers something in to howard’s ear. They both start laughing maniacally. They both lose sight of where they are going and crash in to a cage. They see glowing red eyes.

Howard

Ah oooooo…..

Dilbar has a cue hard that says, AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

Cut to:

Soby and Dilbar stranded on the table. Their friends trying means to save them.

Soby

Well it wasn’t my fault. It was debra-joys fault. She is the one that set the volcano off.

BB in the background, kneeling over the side of the table to stare at the lava.

Cut to:

Debra-Joy

WHATTTT!!!!

I was infarct trying to stop him.

Cut to:

Flashback of Soby chasing after BB and teasing him with a dead fly. Debra makes a sling shot out of her pony and uses a paper mached ball to hit Soby. Soby ducks and misses. The ball hits the volcano and it bursts. The children are running towards the camera.

Invisible cut

Camera tracks out of Debra-joys mouth.

Debra Joy

Uhhhhhh……..

OOPS!

Cut to:

Soby trying to give courage to BB. Convincing him to jump together.

Soby

3

BB

2

Both (Side by side shot)

1!

Long shot of BB jumping across. Low angle shot of diblar and howard and they see BB jump across over them.

BB reaches the cabinet to his friends, he latches to the side but his friends pull him up. He realizes soby is left behind. He is the scared one. He is of two minds. Thinks that the lava thing was his fault and his friends hate him so he deserves to die. The children make him realize that is was not his fault entirely and all his forgiven. They cheer him up to the point that he jumps towards them. A slow-mo shot of him jumping towards them (In a very spider-man 2 manner). He suddenly misses the cabinet by an inch and latched on to the side. BB holds his hand, trying to pull him up. Camera tracks back to reveal it is a long chain and everyone is trying to pull each other up. Soby suddenly see glowing red eyes behind his friends. All of the children scream. He mistakes it for a dragon. He tells them to run, but they still hang on to him. He pulls his hand and sacrifices himself to save his friends.

Low angle shot of BB shouting NOOOOOOOO!!!…..

Top shot of Soby falling in to the lava and screaming.

Close-up shot of the school bell ringing.

We instantly zoom out to reveal that is was a fantasy world. There was no lava as the children were only playing a game and the class is a mess. Soby is on the carpeted classroom floor exaggeratingly screaming.

BB

I cants believe he sacrimafise himself of us. He was a true hero.

(Soby in the background still on the floor and screaming)

I can still hear his scream sometimes.

Cut to:

Class door opening

Teacher

All right class, breaks over.

The class is in order

Fade out.

END.

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